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Charles EP M.

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One trick I really like is how it cuts between narrative and faux-history-book chapters to show dirty deeds
like burning San Lazaro and killing a president challenging Secretary Bartlett
and then how the general public will never know for sure why things happened, though many suspect.
 
Charles EP M. said:
One trick I really like is how it cuts between narrative and faux-history-book chapters to show dirty deeds
like burning San Lazaro and killing a president challenging Secretary Bartlett
and then how the general public will never know for sure why things happened, though many suspect.
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I’m happy that came through! I let some family members read an earlier version of the manuscript, and they said that it wasn’t clear enough who exactly was behind some of said dirty deeds.
 
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