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The Write Stuff: Writing for the Readers
- Thread starter AndyC
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- Derbyshire
Some very good examples there.
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You Wouldn't Steal A Political Party
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- Anyers-upon-Senn, Island-of-France
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- He/him
I enjoy how mechanical and technical this all is. Not something I've seen in writing advice much.
I think a word was accidentally here.
A couple of random points not related to the substance of the article. I enjoyed the photo caption very much. And a 3-fold increase in maintainence period is pretty impressive!
I think a word was accidentally here.
A couple of random points not related to the substance of the article. I enjoyed the photo caption very much. And a 3-fold increase in maintainence period is pretty impressive!
I'd say that playing with the medium is fine sometimes, but the problem is once you give it an inch the type to take it bring the rest of the mile in with them. At that point, your fourth wall is shot full of holes and you need a new narrator. Probably need a new writer, too- those holes tend to be two-way.