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Good idea for an article series.
I like the 1979 result being described as Not Proven
Shouldn't it be "there"?At the time of ratification their were anti-Union riots in major Scottish cities,[...]
Isn't an "as" or "when" or "before" missing? Also, I think "[...] Lothian. Though the leadership underestimated him(,) he addressed an unprecedented [...]" or "[...] even though the leadership underestimated him. He addressed an unprecedented [...]" would fit better.The most fervent anti-devolution campaigner for Labour Vote No was Tam Dalyell, West Lothian, though the leadership underestimated him he addressed an unprecedent number of meetings during the campaign.
I propose changing this to: "With all the campaigns launched in January 1979, the questions of many undecided voters were: would the Assembly lead to a breakup of the UK, would it mean more bureaucracy and more government, and would it cost more?".With all the campaigns launched in January 1979, the questions of many undecided voters were would the Assembly lead to a breakup of the UK, would it mean more bureaucracy and more government, and would it cost more.
Shouldn't it be "MORI" like elsewhere?[...] another Mori poll [...]
This comma should be a (semi)colon.This was perhaps most significant, a poll at the end of January from System Three showed Conservative voters 39% in favour of Yes; a month later only 19% of Conservative voters were responding in favour of Yes.
"[...] or against the No campaign(s) [...]".[...] for the Yes campaigns of against the No campaign [...]